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Kat-Quills 


Yo, me and you are going to create two bad ass animes. One is called Fall Out Boy, with the destruction of the world in a Nuecular winter, with the exception of Fall Out Boy, ironically named Tray meaning misfortune and grief.


The other, sadly lacks a name as of right now, but it is the children of all the fairy tales, so Elsa's daughter, and Jack Frost's son, and Belle's son and daughter, then the storytellers, so the Grimm siblings, and the folk lore children, Red riding Hoods child. yada yada, and then at the very bottom of the popularity pyramid is the Narrator children. So no special talents just narrating. The character, maybe named Raven, strives to become popular as he is the only Narrator at the school,then a new kid moves and makes him realize that maybe just maybe narrating isn't so bad... yeah.  
Yo, I'm keeping Echo's original design. So yeah here, dweeb.
Kat-Quills

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i. Hey Jude, don't make it bad,
you're their star child,
but without praise.
you aren't meant to screw up,
no you had to be perfect.
 you want to become an animator?
                   that won't go very far.
i.. well i hated you the moment you first asked me,
"Do you wanna play box cat?" 
in that obnoxiously loud squeaky voice.
you were perfect... in my eyes at least. Perfectly annoying.
you were loud and obnoxious,
a tattle and a cry baby.
I'm sorry.

ii. We all want to change the world.
i still didn't like you when we met again,
at the fair in the middle of september,
hair pulled back in a long pony tail.
You didn't whine as much,
and we had a blast on that car flingy ride thingy.
i liked you a tiny bit more.
but then you begged to play the stupid goldfish game,
and well i severely disliked you again.
I didn't realize as we grew older i would need you more than ever.
I'm sorry.

iii. sitting in nowhere land,
Doesn't have a point of view,
isn't he a bit like you, love?
at this time, you did not have a point of view,
just mindless clay in your parents hands.
that was the first and mostly last time you said you hated me and meant it... (almost)
was i really that annoying, senpai?
you spoke of how mean your teacher was,
and how cool this lizard you caught was.
oh, and how's Zember?
i wouldn't trade anything for those memories.
I love you.

iv. oooh i need your love babe.
so i move in after a crappy divorce between parents.
I have decided that you are okay,
and i would rather enjoy sharing a room with you,
eventually you became my secret sharing partner in crime,
and we were close, just not that close.
we were easily separated,
and i made you cry. 
i'm sorry i told you santa wasn't real.

v. can't buy me love
I have developed depression,
by now we have become 'twins',
but polar opposites.
i was struggling, i was drowning, 
but you threw a life jacket at me,
as the sharks fed on me with "youre fine, just stop."
I love you beyond words can describe.
and thank god you don't want diamond rings in return.

vi. you were only waiting for this moment to arise.
before, and even now, youre being overshadowed,
even if you are they're star child.
no body has seen you, as i have.
they don't realize beneath youre broken wings,
and sunken eyes that you are only waiting for the moment to be free.
they do not realize that you love so wholesomely that it's sad your single.
they do not realize there is beauty in mistakes.
and that you are the most beautiful flawed person i have ever met.
i love you more that i could ever type.
you, my beautiful broken winged blackbird, are going to go places. 
i promise. 

vii. Here comes the sun little darling. 
i know you'll go to the places you have dreamed of, 
San Francisco, Tokyo, Washington,
I wish i could go with you,
but most of these adventures you'll probably take alone.
and i apologize now for my absence.
you'll sprout out in a billion different directions,
you'll explode like a star,
and you will dazzle everyone,
you will be great. 
and most of all,
my door will always be open to you. 
and i say,
it's alright.
i love you Breadstixx.
to the artist, love the writer
Kat-Quills 

Hey love, i've been working on this for a couple days... um i hope you like it... and i'm sorry if you cry. just know that i love you, kay? Like 10 llamas and 13 alpalca's love you... i just...yeah i love you.
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Kat-Quills 


Yo, me and you are going to create two bad ass animes. One is called Fall Out Boy, with the destruction of the world in a Nuecular winter, with the exception of Fall Out Boy, ironically named Tray meaning misfortune and grief.


The other, sadly lacks a name as of right now, but it is the children of all the fairy tales, so Elsa's daughter, and Jack Frost's son, and Belle's son and daughter, then the storytellers, so the Grimm siblings, and the folk lore children, Red riding Hoods child. yada yada, and then at the very bottom of the popularity pyramid is the Narrator children. So no special talents just narrating. The character, maybe named Raven, strives to become popular as he is the only Narrator at the school,then a new kid moves and makes him realize that maybe just maybe narrating isn't so bad... yeah.  

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Carmalain7 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2015
Hey Kehlani,

Thank you, good miss, for the favorite on I was never a writer.

I know it's not an easy piece of reading, so for you to go out of your way to let me know that it connected with you, it means a lot.
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ECHORIVER6450 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
I loved it! Normally I don't connect with poetry easy, but I felt like I was reading a biography of me!~ So no problem. ^U^
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Carmalain7 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2015
All the more of an honor than, good miss, I hope your biography continues to be full of lovely words painting vibrant pictures. =D
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StarfurBleedingbone Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!! Thank you so much for the watch!!
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ECHORIVER6450 Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome~ Thanks for the fave!
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Kat-Quills Featured By Owner Edited Jun 25, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
KK, you know that game that Pewdie, Jacksepticeye, and Markilplier were playing in that one montage?
I just now realized they were playing Gmod.

www.youtube.com/watch?v=lQeNzi…
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ECHORIVER6450 Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Collio?
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Kat-Quills Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yeah...
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ECHORIVER6450 Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
I can't wait to see you
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Khaimin Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much for the watch! :hug: 
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